cipher

Here is a great short I felt empathy for the character and got sucked in to the story right till the very end. The only thing that I felt was that some points in the short could have been done a little quicker and not made such a long short. But it was still a great little short. Visually I feel they could of used some of the colours in the lighten to help change the mood when the character did. This subtle light changing could bring you closer to the character. Also with the visual side of things I did not feel overly about the style but did give it a good twist to the mix of the cipher he was trying to do and related and pushed that side of the story. 

The Thomas Beale Cipher from Andrew S Allen on Vimeo.